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Critiques
Her weapon is very cool, and her outfit is tailored to her. And you did a great job with the wind blowing both her coat and her hair in the same direction. There are, however, several things that bother me. One, her hand looks withered underneath that glove. Her pose is a bit awkward, and her pants wrinkle too much at the knees.
Very good job!
The outfit, character design and originality are the strongest parts of this piece. From her unique long red trench coat, to her fur like ringed under shirt..to her awesome face mask; you don't see many characters like her!
The soft colouring has always been a favourite of mine in Atramina's work. It's soft but brings out the maximum detail! The drapery too and hair all flow in the same direction, which is also a mistake some artists do, but not Atramina!
Some minor corrections I can see is her what hand seems small compared to the rest of her body. The sword could be a little bigger too, to match single short swords normal thickness. She's leaning a little bit too much on the one leg and her body seems to look like it's kinda off balance. For the glow on her pants as well, the soft background doesn't seem like it's giving off the strong red light depicted on her pants..adding some sort of red light, or darker red in that direction would help correct this.
But how, always a pleasure to see this artist's work! Nice job!
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