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©2009 =Atramina
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"A fox in the night shed blood on the streets,
crimson her smile, countless her sins"


Call me crazy if you want. I created this character for Rorschach. Why? Cause I felt I had to. I felt he needed to be love. I felt he needed a partner. Someone able to complete him, to be one with him. And here she is. The Scarlet Kitsune, in an easier way, the Red Fox. I love how she came out, and even if I know, this has nothing to do with Watchmen, and will NEVER have, cause Watchmen ended and that's all, I wanted to do this. So bad. So I hope you like her!

Rorschach and Watchmen (c) Alan Moore and Dave Gibbons
Scarlet Kitsune (c) me

Critiques


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Rorschach's devotion to justice is absolute, and he will do anything in its name. In the novelization of Ian Fleming's The Spy who Loved Me, a police officer who speaks to Vivienne Michel tells her that the only real difference between James Bond and the thugs he saved her from is their employer; James Bond is every bit as brutal, as vicious as Sluggsy Malone and Sol Horror, and as such, no woman can truly keep up with him. Rorschach is like James Bond, only he is working illegally, and it seems no woman would ever want to be with him; after all, he will do anything for justice. It's quite a pity, really, but this woman here is perfect for Rorschach: she's sexy, she's well-costumed, and she looks merciless. Even for a guy who does things so well on a solitary basis, I'm sure Rorschach gets lonely every now and then. Plus, I doubt anything in his past would shock her.

Her weapon is very cool, and her outfit is tailored to her. And you did a great job with the wind blowing both her coat and her hair in the same direction. There are, however, several things that bother me. One, her hand looks withered underneath that glove. Her pose is a bit awkward, and her pants wrinkle too much at the knees.

Very good job!
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At first glance you think of a masked warrior ready to strike with this piece. The soft background is simple but doesn't take away from the over all character which is a problem these days with a lot of artwork. The background just takes away from the character in front of it.

The outfit, character design and originality are the strongest parts of this piece. From her unique long red trench coat, to her fur like ringed under shirt..to her awesome face mask; you don't see many characters like her!

The soft colouring has always been a favourite of mine in Atramina's work. It's soft but brings out the maximum detail! The drapery too and hair all flow in the same direction, which is also a mistake some artists do, but not Atramina!

Some minor corrections I can see is her what hand seems small compared to the rest of her body. The sword could be a little bigger too, to match single short swords normal thickness. She's leaning a little bit too much on the one leg and her body seems to look like it's kinda off balance. For the glow on her pants as well, the soft background doesn't seem like it's giving off the strong red light depicted on her pants..adding some sort of red light, or darker red in that direction would help correct this.

But how, always a pleasure to see this artist's work! Nice job!
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:iconakiriana:
nice piece Atramina XD

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"Do what you want, is that what you wana hear? Well I can't let you do it, because if you die on me, I'm guna have nightmares." <Cloud
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I think rorschach would have a word to say about showing that much of skin xDDD he's kinda like that. Still it's great! Love the mask and the coat! xD
:iconenryine:
absolutely stunning D:
the lighting/shadows and textures are amazing and the detail is oustanding =D
the backround fits well with the character^^
keep up the amazing work <33

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Thank you!! ^^

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XDDDDDD hey it's not that much! XDDDD then he'd better not come to Spain in summer XDDDD

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:iconhisanakuchiki:
she is very wonderful! I love the red and in your hands, the red is fantastic!
I love her little dagger too!;)
Great piece mina!:)

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Thank you so much! I'm so happy!

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oh thank you so much! I did not use textures for this one ^^

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you're so welcome! :)

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