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I love big katanas XD
No, seriously, I wanted to draw a peacock-style kimono for a long time, and now I've finally done. Hardest: Obi and kimono pattern. Not so much to say... ^^' Feel free to critique with sense C: Thank you so much, ^ctJemm, for the Daily Deviation. Daily DeviationGiven 2009-05-17The Peacock by =Atramina - It's a personal pride for me to be able to feature this gorgeous piece of artwork. Not only has it a vivid beautiful feel but I know how hard the artist has worked to reach to this level, and at lightning speed too! I highly recommend the rest of her gallery, such a beautifully flourishing artist. An inspiration to many! (Featured by `ctJemm) CommentsYou outdid yourself lovely girl <333 It looks amazing and in my opinion your best yet.
-- "Some people would jump on a burning bandwagon'. Amazing! I must say you realy made a awesome piece of work here !
Sword: Long and awesome. Rope around is a nice add to make it look more interesting. Obi and kimono: Look beautyfull. I love the red patern. I realy love how it blends in with the wings on her back. The hair: Feathers in her hair look pretty good Simpley said Epic -- "We'll toss the dice however they fall, and snuggle the girls be they short or tall, then follow young Mat whenever he calls, to dance with Jak o' the Shadows." You've got to learn to keep up with Byakuya when you're a fangirl *SweetYuya |
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Critiques
First of all, I really love how you did the design of the kimono outfit that she's wearing as well as the texture patterns on it. It's really colourful this way, especially from the way how the kimono flows down her body. The peacock feathers on the back of her came out incredibly good too, because of the colourful design on the back of it. You did such a outstanding job on her beautiful hair and the blueish bead on the bottom part of it. I also like how you did the skin tone on her as well as her facial features. The posing and anatomical proportions came out really incredible.
Secondly, the design of the katana sword is really brilliant and I like how you did part of the rope on the bottom of the katana sword itself. In the rest of the illustration, most notably the scenery, you did such a outstanding job on the trees as well as the green leaves on the top of it. The grass field as well as the dirt gravel road and the red temple looks very good.
In all, you have worked so hard on how well you did this painting. All of your works are really awesome! Keep it up!
I'm absolutely in love with this piece. The colour combination, the pose, the background and that subtle smile on her face make this piece completely stunning . Everything flows together nicely, making it a pleasure for the eyes <3
However, there are still things you could work on a little more.
That's all. Even though there are quite alot of things to improve I still believe this is the best piece you've ever done and I'm really amazed by how wonderful this looks <3 I adore the design of the kimono and her beautiful eyes.
Astounding job and final result!
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